100 word challenge #19


“Ruby! come here this instant.”
“Coming dad!” yelled Ruby
I ran back to the campsite with the wood for the the campfire. I went inside the tent to set up my bed and I heard a scream from dad. I ran out of the tent and dad was gone. I looked around as the flame flicked and then went out. I started to freak out. My dad was gone and the fire had gone out. I didn’t know how to start another fire. I started to hear someone say. “I am still here Ruby.” I was freaking out. I ran and ran and then suddenly I died of stress.

My set a goal to use talking marks in my story because I don’t use them a lot in my conversations. I used little in my story but I want to do t next week as well so I get in the habit of doing it.

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