100 word challenge

August16

Ready, set, go, I dived into the water, and looking to my side I could see my friend Amy. She was green her face was completely green. When the race had finished I had gotten first. As I stared into the water it began to turn green. The people who were in the water at the time started screaming. They got out of the pool as fast as they could but one of them took too long and he did from the green water. His name was James Guy. I liked that boy but I guess I can’t talk to him anymore. That was the worst day of my life.

My goal was to make my story based on a real story. I think I did that OK but only half of this story was real. It was based on one of my school swim carnivals.

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