100 word Challenge


My beautiful brown hair flapping behind me, swaying is the wind. Something is follow me. I am worried. I am scared. Something hard hits me from the left and then the right. I turn as quickly as I can to see who it is but all I see is a camera. Something hard hits me again and this time on my head. I fall to the ground. Unconscious. I wake up on a bed with darkness around me. The only sound is a car, but the sound fades. A door opens and I am blinded with the bright light.

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“100 word Challenge”

  1. March 30th, 2017 at 4:08 pm      Reply estella2016 Says:

    Great Job! The story got me hooked especially when the character was being chased. Great Job once again!

  2. March 30th, 2017 at 5:35 pm      Reply ziggy2014 Says:

    Hi Lily,

    In this piece of writing I liked how you have used stuff we learnt in class such as short sentences and descriptive verbs. I also liked how you made the prompt words bold.


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