100 word challenge

May9

I just couldn’t eat something so disgusting. It was green and slimy and there was a giant bowl of it. It had little black spots through it that were the size of water melon seeds. It was the consistency of jelly. I took the spoon from bedside it still looking at the gloop. I take the tiniest of bites and spit it out as soon as it touches my tongue. It tastes like broccoli and green apple put together with water melon rind. And the little black spots are pitaya seeds. I take it to the toilet and flush it away.

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“100 word challenge”

  1. May 10th, 2017 at 10:28 am      Reply khabbaza Says:

    I really like how you explained the flavours
    and put things that would not go together.


  2. May 10th, 2017 at 10:30 am      Reply khabbaza Says:

    I really like how you mixed weird stuff together. – Aleyna


  3. May 14th, 2017 at 9:05 pm      Reply antsclass Says:

    Eughhhhhwww!!!
    I love the way you incorporated as many senses as you could to make this revolting description!
    Well done
    Ant


  4. May 17th, 2017 at 5:19 pm      Reply phoebe2014 Says:

    Hi Lilly
    You described you disgusting food to us so much that it planted a picture in my head on it… please, I don’t want to know XD.
    Anyways, you did a good job on this and the prompt was definitely used very well!
    Phoebe


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