100 word challenge

October11

Lila pulled it towards her face. The soft light brown material was different from anything else. Its green eyes were scratched from old age. The neck was floppy and it made her head fall all the time. The body had too much stuffing and was very puffy. The extra stuffing had come from the neck. She kept at her face for a good for five minutes before getting her book and started to read. After about an hour she got under her covers of her bed and fell asleep with the soft material against her chest.

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“100 word challenge”

  1. October 15th, 2017 at 10:01 pm      Reply antsclass Says:

    Lilly,
    I love the way you chose to make this a description through third person perspective- it made this really different to read, and you have given a great example here of how you can use ‘show-not-tell’ of a possession to create a mood in a narrative.
    Great work
    Ant


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