100 word challenge

November15

We heard our Mum’s car pull up in front of the house.

“Where will we hide it all?” my sister shrieked. We had all the food laid out on my bed. All the chocolate, lollies and chips.

“Under the bed” I yell

“But she will see it”

“Then start eating”

My sister and I then started to eat all we could but then we hear the door open downstairs.

“I’m home” Our mum calls. We hear her coming upstairs and me and my sister start to panic. Our Mum enters the room.

“Where did you get all this food from?”

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“100 word challenge”

  1. November 20th, 2017 at 11:43 am      Reply sofiama2016 Says:

    Hi Lilly,
    I really like this piece because it is really relatable (for me, it is kind of what i do when i am home alone). I really like how you ended the story with a question as well. It leaves me as a reader wondering, Where did they get all that food from? As i was reading i kind of thought that they had just grabbed the food from the pantry (again, what i do sometimes) but if it had the question at the end the mum must be confused which would mean that they didn’t get it from the pantry.
    Nice Job!! 😉 🙂 😉 🙂 😉 🙂


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